| "Love is a Battlefield" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: AutumnsRedRose- yaoifanfic lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2010 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i am enjoying this very much! :) please update soon
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh....no! Oh gods...I hate cliffies!! Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 05:36 CST
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this is so good, how in the world can sessy believe that naraku loves him?
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn it Sesshomaru, snap out of it you know adamn well that that asshole Naraku does not love you.*pouts* And Inuyasha when are you going to just kill the bitch, I mean she is really getting on everyone's bad side. Sitting you for no fucking reason, just because she got blood on her, big fucking deal take a damn shower!!!*kills Kagome* You know what better yet, leave the slut and take Sesshomaru back, you'll be able to find him cuz of the mark, duh!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangeldai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 21:30 CST
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ok, i am not able to put into words how furious i am right now. how. can. you. Leave. It . THERE!???? u HAVE to update soon! i need to know tat Sess will snap out of whatever idiotic impression he's under adn he and inu will be back together. ( plus i want those freakin' beads of Yashy. stupid kagome..) PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: AutumnsRedRose- yaoifanfic lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but you have to keep going! i wanna c inu and sessy back together again with their pup....
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 22:54 CST
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Well fuck me, could this get any worse. I mean damn it Inuyasha let go of fucking Kagome and find your brother who is with Naraku, thank you very much. Naraku is feeding him lies and you're not helping things by waiting. Yeah, yeah I know the doc said to wait for Sesshomaru to come back or wait a few days, well it's been two so get your ass up and take back Sesshomaru from Naraku or he'll end up dead and it will be your fault. Shit man that first chapter is just conferming that Sesshomaru IS going to die, so whats the point. Naraku obviously gets what he wants.
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2008 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh sess has to get away from him plzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Reviewed By: (Someone) On: October 18, 2008 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story so far, but I do have one question. Is the preface a look into the future or past? Other than that, the story is excellent.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: October 11, 2008 16:08 CDT
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Well sesshomaru certainly is a basket case in this one, but I'm sure that he'll have a cute puppy
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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First you're welcome, but really I sould thank you for such a nice story even though Sesshomaru is hurting really bad right now, it's rare for a MPreg to be Sesshomaru carrying and not Inuyasha. It's always Inuyasha with pup, but if you ask me I think having Sesshomaru the one to bare the pup is more enjoyable. Now with the review which will be short because all I have to say is one: Inuyasha you better find him and fix your mistake, and fast. two: Sesshomaru not everyone hates you, you just have to remember that Cratus loves you as a father should love their son.*smiles* And three: Inuyasha get your mind off of sex until you straighten things out with the man you love!!!!*gives pointed look*
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Title: My poor Sesshy!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor baby, mood swings and the thought that Inuyasha hates him. Sesshomaru is really lucky to have Cratus, the only demon he can love and trust and know that his love is returned. Sesshomaru being with pup just makes him even more Kawaii. *smiles*
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha you big dummy, you jerk, you baka, get you feet god damn moving and go after Sesshomaru. You say you don't hate him, you say you love him then prove it. Don't let Sesshomaru keep thinking that you want nothing to do with him or the pup. Find him, grab him tell him that you're sorry for running like an ass. Tell him that you love him and want to be with him as his mate forever. Tell him this before Naraku gets ahold of him, and rapes him just so that Sesshomaru can carry him pups. God, Sesshomaru has a nack for making me want to cry. He's in so much pain and I just want to take him in my arms and never let him go.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Cratus, I really like how he and Sesshomaru interact with each other. That's how a father/son relationship is supposed to be. I am glad and somewhat sad that Sesshomaru is carrying Inuyasha's pup. Glad because Sesshomaru is happy, and sad because we don't know how Inuyasha is going to take the news of hearing his got a pup on the way. Inuyasha is confusing me, he runs away after he mates Sesshomaru 'cause he wanted to be with Kagome, but know that they are together again he is keeping far away from her. All because the mear tough of her makes his skin crawl. Jeez, Inuyasha if you miss Sesshomaru that much you should never had run away from him, and now you're saying that if he really wanted to be with you he should have came and found you. That's BULLSHIT and you know it, Inuyasha.
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Title: Screams!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! INUYASHA I SO HATE YOU RIGHT NOW. How could you, how could you USE your brother like some fucking whore, plus you mark him as your mate. He loves you, Sesshomaru loves you and you just use him for LUST. You're such a jerk Inuyasha, you say you don't love Kagome like the way she 'loves' you that it's a friend thing our a sister thing. And yet as soon as you mark Sesshomaru as a mate all of a sudden you wanted Kagome as your lover.*glares daggers at Inuyasha* Cratus, please stay close to Sesshomaru he's going to need you even if he doesn't say it. Shit, you had me crying for Sesshomaru's broken heart, but I still love you.*smiles*
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