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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2024 21:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! I've never read an alpha/beta like that before. Definitely
original and well written! 10⭐
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 11:15 PST
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I love the unique plot line, far from the cliched Alpha youkai story line that happens all too often. I myself have been guilty of that. I could appreciate the development of understanding that Kagome goes through. Nice touch with the documentary and you have obviously had fun in the comparision between the animal kingdom and the human heirarchy. Well played my dear. I am greatly anticipating next chapter so I shall wait no longer. |
Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 10:49 PST
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I just couldn't decide what to take on first, so I will be slowly picking my way through these! I love the tension building in this chapter. Safe to say that these two have the same issues any normal couple has, self doubt and always jumping to their own conclusions. I loved the whole Hojo and paradox scene and found myself giggling for some time after. Interested to see how the alpha/beta heirarchy is going to pan out for these two. Off to the next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2011 06:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was...Amazing. |
Reviewed By: sarah86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2010 21:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that even though i am new to this web site i still have been able to read a few other writers i still find my self come back read to read more and more of your works.To but in other words i love your works and they have inspired me to start writing my own story down.I have yet to post any thing yet due to my own writing skills.I hope when i do post you would be so kind as to review my work and give me any pointers you would be willing to share. All and all i'm happy i found this site and your writings and i think you for all your works of art. |
Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2010 11:27 PST
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I can't express enough how much I love re-reading your stories. They really are a life saver for me right now, during these hard times. Thanks for the re-post :) |
Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: chino-chan inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 15:25 PDT
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Hi! I wanted to thank you for your review in my story Absolution. You've no idea how much it means to me that a writer with your repertory compliments my stories. Also, I had already read much of your work, and Alpha-beta and Mating season are my favorites. Anyway, thank you very much, and I hope you'll keep following.
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great fic. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. You write the most original and creative stories, yet somehow manage to stay true to the characters. And I know I've said it before but I love how you show their emotions and the thoughts behind their actions. I know most people would have had Kagome remove Inuyasha's rosary but I'm glad that you didn't. There are times that she needs it make them equal, and that is what this story was about. That they be equal. This is the type of thing I would have loved to have seen happen in the anime or manga. Great job.
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 01:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome, I love the play on canine instinct. I always have. I hope you have the time and inspiration to right somemore romantic PWP's again soon.
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usually don't like it when people make inuyasha to much like adog (although it is true he has dogly habits, his mind is human) u pull it off very well though, love how you set the pack thing up, where she didnt notice she was asking that until after it came out, and I felt sorry for Inuyasha when he asked if he did something wrong after she said she didn't wanna be alpha, I could just imagine the way his ears would droop, cute yet sad, great fic like always, look forward to more. You're awesome! Keep up the good work =D
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Reviewed By: johneotaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 19:16 PST
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Awesome plot. It feels as though it was written just for me.
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 03:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flawless as always.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Graidon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 23:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I love the concept, I love the way it's written and I love most of all I love the mixture of the justified OOC-ness of Inuyasha and the old grumpy Inuyasha. Just when I was about to think, "Oh Lord, she's gonna ruin this great concept with Inuyasha acting all crazy", you give such good and justifiable reasons for his behavior. You could have just as easily let him act all different and then try to make sense of it at the end, like other authors would try to do, but you kept the story so real and believable throughout that it makes it all the better. I guess that's how you can tell the greats from the amatuers.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 21:34 PDT
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You did a great job. I hate the fics that are just, "Kagome's in heat" and "Inuyasha slammed his (*$(*$@)(* into her dripping tight flowing *&^%$!@ and other lewd references" it was Tastefully and well written, i really enjoyed it. :)
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Reviewed By: Bluejello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"cram into her Tartus of a backpack" I assume you're referring to the TARDIS of Doctor Who? Otherwise, I seriously need to brush up on my Greek mythology. ;)
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Title: Back again
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 14:08 PDT
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Well this was enjoyable and somthing a bit new. I know reading something from you will alway please me. I took my time at first because I'm not a big kagome fan and have been into yaoi latley I one thing rings true you are one of the very very very few I would read with inuyasha and Kagome pairing. even though I still hate the beads still being around his neck I really did enjoy this story. But how can I not it's you writing it.
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Reviewed By: hobbes221 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 21:38 PDT
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I swear, you have to be one of the best out there. (I say as if that's a bad thing) I don't think that you have written one fic that I don't love. This take on the pack thing is great, you always seem to have those two have the most realistic talks ever, outstanding! Well done and I'm looking forward to whatever you give us next. Thank you for all the work.
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 18:36 PDT
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My goodness! Finally! Do you know how long I've been trying to find an Inu/Kag romance fic involving the pack heirarchy?! I've been trying to formulate my own for a while, but it just hasn't come together. This was excellently done as well! I love your writing style. It's so easy to just be absorbed in the story, not just for the entertainment value, but how interesting your concepts were as well. Wonderfully done!^^ Do you happen to know any other good fic bridging the smae topic by chance?
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 04:55 PDT
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Lol, another brilliant fic! ^^ This one was super-cute, as I've never seen a plotline like it... and yet it makes perfect sense. I knew exactly what show Kagome and Souta were watching, too! xD I love that show! The only flaw I noticed, was Kagome's shaving... Japanese are naturally bald, like Native Americans (except for pubes, of course), so there really wouldn't be anything for her to shave. =/ Overall, though, this was a great PWP, and I'll be looking for many more! =D
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Reviewed By: Hairann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 04:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. It was very well done, from start to finish. Amazing job. 10/10 I gotta remember to thank Ethereal Siren for recommending this story.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooooo cute! I loved it! You always write some of the best stories :D. Especially about InuYasha I think my favorite story of all time is Mating Season which was the first fanfic I read. But this was a really cute story and im glad I got to read it :). Well keep up all your great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squels* I LOVE IT!!!! REALLY LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 14:12 PDT
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Wow! Loved it. Keep writing! Now I'm going to try to read some of your other stories.
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 22:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed this very much. In addition to the story being good, I'm always a sucker for completed works going up all at once.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 16:50 PDT
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if we look at human gangs or any structured 'human' society it could be likened to a pack mentality. one may not have to in all cases exert one's dominance in a physical sense (financial, popularity, intelligence/charisma etc.) but there will always be a 'head', even in a democratic or representative government there is usually one who 'chairs'. ♣ as the canine youkai one would assume similar behaviors and social structures when they aren't all that far from our own(i believe canine pack language and the 'absolute' authority of the alpha would in some cases be different although if one looks at gang/mob/yakuza/military behavior... ♠ quite an interesting study and adaptation, executed eloquently. quite an entertaining, captivating and intriguing story. ♦ entranced ♦ ginny
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Reviewed By: NewYorkCityUtopia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 15:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fun! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 15:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again you impress me. I'm definitely going to recommend this story to others. I loved the way you did the canine behavior thing. I think that it's spot on that InuYasha would have an extremely difficult time relating to others without his canine instincts dictating hierarchy and such. The Inu aspect being the dominant part of his personalty makes perfect sense because that is the cause visually and with his demonic senses and power. The fact that by it's very nature, the demonic traits of a hanyou must be the dominant traits in their being explains why they must have a time where the demonic aspect completely recedes, leaving just the human part of themselves. It restores balance to their being, which was, during the rest of the month, primarily demonic. InuYasha's need for a pack structure could never be overcome except during his night of weakness, but even then, his human aspect would not be able to let go of it, just like most humans cannot let go and see beyond their own culture, when another culture's system is contradictory to their own... ok I think i need to shut up now :P lol I liked the story a lot and I really look forward to whatever you put out next!
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Title: More of the Same
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is more of the same from you...and that's a good thing. More of the same originality, creativity, style, and incredibly enjoyable works of fanfiction. I have never seen Inuyasha's demonic nature so artfully constructed, nor so perfectly balanced with his human side. I don't like it when Inuyasha's demon nature comes out too much, but you did an excellent job keeping it in balance. As for Kagome...well, we always knew she had it in her ;) A major pet pieve of mine is that Kagome has to remove Inuyasha's rosary before or soon after they get together. Then again, you're the first author to go against this without making me cringe. My problem with the rosary is that people in relationships need to be equals; you can't have one person with too much power over the other. However, to my unending amazement you managed to make Inuyasha and Kagome equals without removing the rosary. This story isn't going to change my pet pieve, but it will give me a whole new perspective on the matter. I really enjoyed how you characterized events that happened in the animanga, such as Inuyasha barging naked into Kagome's room. You said a lot in this story; this is definately a thinking man's (or woman's) fic. But all the contemplation and reflection led to something, a conclusion that left me extremely satisfied. The lemon was amazing, complimented with just the right amount and substance of dialogue. Overall, this is right up there with 'Backwards Blanket' as my favorite works by you, and just in general. Keep up the great work (pretty please).
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:27 PDT
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i love the ending, and it was nice to see Kagome so bold.
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