"Scandalous Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 10:59 CDT Comment/Review: this is a good story and i really liked it. please update broken promises, shattered dreams
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 00:39 CDT Comment/Review: OMG! You need to hurry up and write more!! This story was great and heated! The only thing I would have liked more would have been a second scene of them actually together! I can't wait for more to read! Keep up the good work!
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Title: Avid Reader (when am I not?) Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 01:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL This was... *cough* interesting. You've definitely put a new spin on the whole jagan idea. Great job! ^^ *gives you a Hiei cookie*
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: September 25, 2008 11:41 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL, you know, I've always maintained that there was something about Yusuke that just wasn't quite right and you just proved my point. What a pervert! He's the quintessential red blooded male. *chuckles* Any way, good job, I really enjoyed reading this story.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 08:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked this one. It was very creative. There were some funny parts in this story as well. I just love Hiei and Kagome stories.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 24, 2008 09:49 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. Loved it! Steamy and climactic (in more than one way! ;) )Very excellent writing and plot, congrats!
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Reviewed By: puppypal On: September 24, 2008 09:28 CDT Comment/Review: That was HOT!!! Wow I'm still red in the face from reading your fic. Thanks so much for the good read. It was really expressive and made you actually FEEL like you were right there experiencing it with them. Thanks again. Please write more stories.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 02:13 CDT Comment/Review: nice. perfect one shot. i like that yusuke had plans for kagome and hiei turned around and made those plans seriously backfire on him. serves yusuke right.
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