| "The Protector's Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 15:35 CST
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I really like this story and I can't wait to see the part where they lose their memories. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. You have several grammar mistakes dotting the story here and there, but you are able to get the point across. I like your style and am able to see hidden things that you picked up from other fics (e.g. "ship-dip", "houshi-doshi") and it almost makes me nostalgic to read it. In an odd way, it is a nice reminder of 'fics-past'. I would like to commend you on an awesome story and to tell you that I also love your other story ("Inuyasha AD 4023") as well - though I have to say that I actually like that one better, it just seems much more majestic and I never like it when Inu and Kag are thrust into a relationship at the beginning of a story (though I know this story picks up after them knowing each other for two years, I still don't like the fact that they are kissing regularly etc. within the first four chapters - again, just my opinion). The reason that I am leaving this review (because I'm a review miser and have probably left less than ten reviews in the past three years - probably easily over 1,000,000 words of reading, I sometimes chew over 60,000 words a day) is because your Author's Note during the first chapter hits home. I too have also been reading handfuls (or rather "housefuls") of fics and have recently entertained the idea of starting my own. I would like to offer my services to someone in the same boat as someone to bounce ideas off of or perhaps even as your beta. Jay
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Reviewed By: God Amongst Mere Mortals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 21:40 CDT
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Yo everyone- just letting you know that I'm going to be updating hopefully this weekend with a chapter or two. I'm switching between this fic and my other one- Inuyasha AD 4023, which seems to be helping me stay inspired for both. If I hit a dead end on one... then I just switch, in another chapter or two I'll switch back to this one- for now just hold tight, thanks!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 13:54 CDT
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it is nice to see that someone writes yasha's youkai as articulate and intelligent instead of like a bad cave man imitation. nowhere in manga or anime does he grunt out monosyllabic phrases or half sentences. kudos for you! ♣ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 16:10 CDT
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hmmm, so is Kikyou being controlled? Very interesting chap, indeed. Can't wait to read the next one! ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 01:30 CDT
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interesting story. ♣ watch the malapropisms: examples of common mistakes: 'your'-you own it; 'you're'-short for you are. 'fallow'-what farmers do with their fields; 'follow'-going behind someone to where they're going. 'there'-a direction/place; 'their'-they own it; 'they're'-they are. 'too'-also, or more than enough. etc. ~you haven't mistaken all of the above but i forget which ones so they are just examples. ♦ i will be looking forward to reading more. ♠ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:58 CDT
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really liking it and interested to see it will go now that Kikyo has shown herself >
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