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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that they finally returned home safe and sound. It should be fun seeing who impersonates Kagome on the way home Shippo or Fenn. The reaction of Inuyasha at the end to Yusuke declaring Valynne as his girlfriend was hilarious. The others will tell him it is his fault for staying away so long and allowing the two to have time to get to know each other. I think Kagome will calm him down about it and get him to accept. Inuyasha's possessiveness over Tetsusaiga was cute to watch. He isn't going to let it out of his sight or hands for a while after this incident, though I think Kagome will draw the line to sharing a bed with it. When is Sesshomaru going to find out that time travel is possible for his family, or isn't he? I can't wait to see where you go next with this story.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 20:29 CST
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i loved it, again a close call with kouga. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 13:49 CST
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so, their 'smell' ruined the taste of soy for kouga forever. ♣ a close call again with kouga. i wasn't even thinking that the family would be extremely worried for them in the present so it would have been better if they had gone home sooner. now they have to do a whole lot of explaining to everyone. i guess they were entitled to visit since they were there but it wasn't nice not to report back that everyone was fine. ♦ as always, you transport and enthrall your readers. ♥ delighted ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 16:38 CST
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that was awsome! i love how inuyasha is pushing his limits;) kagome is going to be mad when she finds out about what inuyasha did:) i love that kagome is pregnant again! keep up the good work !
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sneaky Inuyasha. If Kagome finds out what they did Inuyasha is going to be in so much trouble. How much farther is he going to push the boundaries, until he gets caught? Also is Sesshomaru ever going to have children of his own or is Inuyasha and his family going to remain his heirs? It sounds like he would really like children of his own someday. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 00:31 CST
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i guess she would be really peeved at him had she found out they took such a risk but to keep it from her... ♣ that was fun. ♥ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 21:13 CST
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i guess it would be a little thrilling and amusing to be there with the risk of being caught when he's supposed to be dead, although kagome wouldn't be considered dead just not near. *squints* ♣ those sutra/ofuda would make some really small blueprints. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great that Inuyasha is leaving another piece of himself in the past in the form of his learning and teaching. It will be interesting when Inuyasha and family return and the youkai from the past learn how much they missed what was going on under their noses. Inuyasha is going to have loads of fun teasing Kouga, Shippou, Sesshomaru and Daichi.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:22 CST
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when we were flooded and the cats were stuck on the second floor of our home for over 24 hours the cats used one spot in one of the bedrooms and it took forever to train them not to revert to that spot if they were upset for any reason, kids can be like that too. ♣ yasha is still stubborn proud, "not hiding!" great little family moment. one wonders if kazuki is going to ignore his instructions to go play with the other kids. ♥ great family moments! ♥ arigatougozaimasu, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am surprised Kagome hasn't had a heart attack in this chapter. First her daughter, who she was recently reunited with, disappears for some time then said daughter ends up attracting Kouga's attention. If she knew about Shippou too she would probably just faint on the spot. I liked how the villagers covered for her with Shippou and how Shippou thinks it is his fault for not recognizing Kagome and Mayumi. I did laugh heartily over Mayumi only being able to potty in one place though. It is so like a child to get stubborn over funny things, and Inuyasha and Kagome's child would be stubborn. I am looking forward to the next update in this story and thanks for keeping them coming at a good clip.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 23:37 CST
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a series of near misses. little ones do wander around quite a bit don't they? ♠ i have to tell you that i don't usually read stories with kids in them because i can't stand the coochie coo sickening sweetness of stories like that. i am not a gooshy kid person. i enjoy this story because it is wonderful and is realistic in dealing with the children. ♣ you got me laughing and there was children-- you are a miracle worker. (yes, i forbade my children from procreating. so far--so good.) ♥ truly a treat ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 23:31 CST
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i love the confused wisdom that you've given the old guy. it's always a joy to see him in stories where he's written well. so totosai knows kagome's secret. surely even if he told anyone they wouldn't understand him. one thinks he and myoga have a great laugh after everyone leaves at how much totosai has irritated and confused the hapless victim. ♥ truly a treat ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit short to my liking but wonderful none the less:) so the time travel is a family thing huh....i would explan a lot:) loved it keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 16:04 CDT
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cutting things a little too close for comfort, aren't we? ♣ great stuff!! ♥ thanks, gotta go!! ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 21:33 CDT
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this was amazing! i'm glad the family is back together again! i hope there isn't a problem with sessy;) RIN had TWINS...I'm so happy:) keep up the good work!
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