| "Lost in the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 22:47 CDT
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the polyester will probably last five hundred years. ♣ one wonders if fenn could go back a whole five hundred years? you still have left him a complete mystery. ♦ so happy the family is back together. is his daughter going to be a rival for his sword? maybe he could get totosai to make them their own youki seals like tessaiga acts for him. that is, if totosai is still alive or they can find someone else. i'm sure that would be the case because in that world there are plenty hanyou. ♠ sorry got sidetracked. ♥ always a joy ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 23:18 CDT
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they were almost busted!! exciting, all of the close calls! though rin knew nothing about what was going on she trusted her sister in law not to spill the beans even with sesshoumaru!? ♣ and yasha in kagome's mum's bathrobe. must look like a slightly small, short yukata on him (just don't bend over). ♥ delighted ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am laughing my butt off over the close call Mayumi just had running into Sesshomaru. And Sango trying to find the sword in the village when it is buried by the well should be fun. I know the kids will return to their parents but I am curious how. Does the sword stay buried by the well for 500 years and then Inuyasha digs it up and goes pick up his kids, does Sesshomaru discover that his father had the ability to time travel and reawakens that power in either himself or Inuyasha and then go rescue the kids or does one of Finn's people have something to do with having the kids reunited with their parents. Why do I think Inuyasha and Kagome are going to be seeing less of Sango and Miroku in the future.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 01:57 CDT
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sorry i hadn't read and reviewed recently. taking care of sick family member-- not enough time.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 17:56 CDT
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awesome! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 03:36 CDT
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curious, maybe rin will help them find tessaiga. if she does we know she can keep a secret as no one else knew. ♣ good stuff, one knows the kids are safe, they are in your capable and talented hands after all. ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 03:24 CDT
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sorry, stuff comes up, disasters happen... don't get to read things quickly sometimes. ♠ one can't keep beating oneself up over an accident, and when there are hyper kids involved accidents are the norm. one understands that when one hasn't raised their own children they just don't have a clue. ~ yes the sword should have been on a shelf or bracket, out of reach but hindsight is always 20/20. ♥ i've known a few childless people who love to give advise and criticize with superior, 'know it all' attitude. ♦ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 17:32 CDT
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Good side, Kazuki does well in hiding his trail...bad side, can no find the sword *glomp*! But I trust all shall end well :)
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 21:10 CDT
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this is great! u have to write more! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 22:56 CDT
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that was great! i liked the 'playing statue' practice. wonderful hanyou/youkai survival techniques. maybe the boy could go to 'sengoku summer camp', die his hair, cover his ears-- maybe fenn could make up something to keep an illusion of humanity that will change their appearance and mask their scent. i'm sure the parents are still frantic, i would be (have been, sleep overs were even hard on me when my kids were that age). ♥ always a delight ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 22:29 CDT
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good to see fenn can be the 'voice of reason', maybe they can trust him more. one wonders at what point in time the well was rebuilt so kagome could start her trek at fifteen? especially if it was still there when yasha had reappeared. hopefully they can get through or the kids find the taijiya village and get miroku and sango to help them after they retrieve the sword. ♣ emotional chapter ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 23:04 CDT
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how devastating to loose one's children, especially the 'not knowing' where they are, how they are, if they're alive or dead. ♣ it is certainly a good thing that shippo had his 'school'. ♦ an emotionally charged chapter. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see more from this universe. I can foresee lots of mayhem, plot twists and potential disasters forthcoming for these two children. Firstly just because they are hanyou and second because they don't know to be afraid of appearing before humans. I hope they run into friends before they get hurt. We know they don't run into Shippou but could they run into Sesshomaru and he has been keeping it a secret all this time? I feel for Kazuki having to watch out for his sister both before the accident and after. I think he will come to appreciate her before this is over though, at least I hope so. I am looking foreward to seeing what deviousness you plan next.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 11:11 CDT
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Oh my...I can see much room for mayhem coming up....
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 10:39 CDT
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OH NO!! one hopes they don't meet any extremely dangerous youkai on their trek, as a flight to japan will take mum and dad over a day to arrange and arrive. they would have to have someone stay at the house to await the kids' arrival in case they used the sword. ♣ one wonders why they didn't have a rack on a wall to keep it out of reach for when he went to bed or even if he kept it bedside for emergencies the rack could be for when he took a shower or went to the bathroom. with precocious hanyou children the term 'baby proofing' should take on new meaning. ♦ so glad to be reading more of your wonderful work! ♥ overjoyed ♥ ginny
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