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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sneaky Inuyasha. If Kagome finds out what they did Inuyasha is going to be in so much trouble. How much farther is he going to push the boundaries, until he gets caught? Also is Sesshomaru ever going to have children of his own or is Inuyasha and his family going to remain his heirs? It sounds like he would really like children of his own someday. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 00:31 CST
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i guess she would be really peeved at him had she found out they took such a risk but to keep it from her... ♣ that was fun. ♥ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 21:13 CST
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i guess it would be a little thrilling and amusing to be there with the risk of being caught when he's supposed to be dead, although kagome wouldn't be considered dead just not near. *squints* ♣ those sutra/ofuda would make some really small blueprints. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great that Inuyasha is leaving another piece of himself in the past in the form of his learning and teaching. It will be interesting when Inuyasha and family return and the youkai from the past learn how much they missed what was going on under their noses. Inuyasha is going to have loads of fun teasing Kouga, Shippou, Sesshomaru and Daichi.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:22 CST
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when we were flooded and the cats were stuck on the second floor of our home for over 24 hours the cats used one spot in one of the bedrooms and it took forever to train them not to revert to that spot if they were upset for any reason, kids can be like that too. ♣ yasha is still stubborn proud, "not hiding!" great little family moment. one wonders if kazuki is going to ignore his instructions to go play with the other kids. ♥ great family moments! ♥ arigatougozaimasu, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am surprised Kagome hasn't had a heart attack in this chapter. First her daughter, who she was recently reunited with, disappears for some time then said daughter ends up attracting Kouga's attention. If she knew about Shippou too she would probably just faint on the spot. I liked how the villagers covered for her with Shippou and how Shippou thinks it is his fault for not recognizing Kagome and Mayumi. I did laugh heartily over Mayumi only being able to potty in one place though. It is so like a child to get stubborn over funny things, and Inuyasha and Kagome's child would be stubborn. I am looking forward to the next update in this story and thanks for keeping them coming at a good clip.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 23:37 CST
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a series of near misses. little ones do wander around quite a bit don't they? ♠ i have to tell you that i don't usually read stories with kids in them because i can't stand the coochie coo sickening sweetness of stories like that. i am not a gooshy kid person. i enjoy this story because it is wonderful and is realistic in dealing with the children. ♣ you got me laughing and there was children-- you are a miracle worker. (yes, i forbade my children from procreating. so far--so good.) ♥ truly a treat ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 23:31 CST
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i love the confused wisdom that you've given the old guy. it's always a joy to see him in stories where he's written well. so totosai knows kagome's secret. surely even if he told anyone they wouldn't understand him. one thinks he and myoga have a great laugh after everyone leaves at how much totosai has irritated and confused the hapless victim. ♥ truly a treat ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit short to my liking but wonderful none the less:) so the time travel is a family thing huh....i would explan a lot:) loved it keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 16:04 CDT
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cutting things a little too close for comfort, aren't we? ♣ great stuff!! ♥ thanks, gotta go!! ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 21:33 CDT
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this was amazing! i'm glad the family is back together again! i hope there isn't a problem with sessy;) RIN had TWINS...I'm so happy:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 22:47 CDT
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the polyester will probably last five hundred years. ♣ one wonders if fenn could go back a whole five hundred years? you still have left him a complete mystery. ♦ so happy the family is back together. is his daughter going to be a rival for his sword? maybe he could get totosai to make them their own youki seals like tessaiga acts for him. that is, if totosai is still alive or they can find someone else. i'm sure that would be the case because in that world there are plenty hanyou. ♠ sorry got sidetracked. ♥ always a joy ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 23:18 CDT
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they were almost busted!! exciting, all of the close calls! though rin knew nothing about what was going on she trusted her sister in law not to spill the beans even with sesshoumaru!? ♣ and yasha in kagome's mum's bathrobe. must look like a slightly small, short yukata on him (just don't bend over). ♥ delighted ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am laughing my butt off over the close call Mayumi just had running into Sesshomaru. And Sango trying to find the sword in the village when it is buried by the well should be fun. I know the kids will return to their parents but I am curious how. Does the sword stay buried by the well for 500 years and then Inuyasha digs it up and goes pick up his kids, does Sesshomaru discover that his father had the ability to time travel and reawakens that power in either himself or Inuyasha and then go rescue the kids or does one of Finn's people have something to do with having the kids reunited with their parents. Why do I think Inuyasha and Kagome are going to be seeing less of Sango and Miroku in the future.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 01:57 CDT
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sorry i hadn't read and reviewed recently. taking care of sick family member-- not enough time.
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