| "Work in progress" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good! Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: sbdy On: April 29, 2009 04:06 CDT
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WRITE MOAR >< OMG who cares bout rewiews. How can you leave us with such a cliffy? Ur evil >< Anyway LOVED the story so far.
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Reviewed By: Slightly Obsessive FP On: February 21, 2009 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good - no glaring spelling or grammar mistakes. Fun to read,I've enjoyed what you've written so far.
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Title: dude update
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2009 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
please update this is really good
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Reviewed By: Erin Kay On: February 14, 2009 17:13 CST
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Just read your story. So far so good. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 22:06 CST
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Im sorry you've only gotten two reviews...but this story is absolutelyy amazing!!! it captivated me from the first line. please update soon!!!! i am looking forward to how you write out the plot. : )
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Reviewed By: Mitsuyo On: November 22, 2008 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe your story has only gotten one review, I think its amazing. I shall be waiting for more chapters.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 06:37 CDT
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the title of this story drew me in. i have to guess that the significance of it will be revealed later. i love the dreamy, trusting quality that you gave rin. it looks as if this will be a well written interesting story. the one thing that bothered me was a pet peeve of mine. in the last paragraph you used past when it should have been passed.
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