| "Single Switch" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish!!! I need a good laugh off this story!!
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Reviewed By: navyfacepaint [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty interesting story! It'sa new approach to the series and I really like it! You do have some spelling and grammar issues, though, and that takes away from the overall effect of the story. You have a little word confusion (then/than, quiet/quite/quit, here/hear), but that's easily fixed! Keep up with your work! Can't wait to see how this turns out!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool switch. If you are going to follow the whole Kikyo resurrection then I'd definately make it Sesshomaru as the resurrected character. As for a romantic pursurer for Inu, I think Ayame or perhaps an OC inu-demoness in Koga's original role with Koga in the Ayame role. I'd leave Miroku and Sango's characters alone...I think they'd still work well with your setup. I figure you'll be taking the story in different directions than the original anyway becuase there wouldn't be much point to it if you were just going to retell the original story with Inu & Kag's characters switched. Looking forward to seeing where you take your story!
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Pooter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far, and I think you should absolutely have Kikyo as the older sister, and put Ayame as the agressive alternate suiter. Although only problem i forsee is the lunar rainbow proposal, or possibly making Kouga look like a puss, if you do switch the characters like this, please allow Kouga to retain some of his cocky attitude. Also, are you going to switch the roles of Miroku and Sango? If so are you going to make Miroku and Inuyasha close like Kagome and Sango were in the original story? I don't know those are just some ideas, but you have a great story, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ShinkanNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 21:02 CDT
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kikyo should take the place of sesshomaru and you should put Ayame in Koga's place, you should Also switch Sango's and Meroku's p[lace's making Sango the Hintie and Muroku the slayer...just to mix it up some more
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Reviewed By: KristinM On: May 05, 2009 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really good, and a more original approach than I've seen with other stories with similar plots. I wonder what the pulsing sword that Inuyasha had meant... And my vote is definatly to have Kikyo as Sesshomaru. I may not be her biggest fan, but I don't imagine her as a fangirl. Looking forward to reading more
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 17:11 CDT
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Hmmm if those are my two options Kikyo as Sesshomaru or as Kouga, then I would have to say as Sessy since they are both cold and calculating. But I kinda like the idea of leaving Kouga as Kouga, just make him bi. Then he will pursue both Inuyasha and Kagome and they can both freak out over it, from jealousy that the other might enjoy his attentions and revulsion to being courted by someone they are not interested in.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole role revesal is interesting!
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 02:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
oo! I love this, so much to work with! Continue it looks very interesting so far and i really want to see what you switched around! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuaeryn On: October 02, 2008 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story idea! I look forward to the continued changes. You've changed enough from the original so that it's not too familiar, please keep up the good work! Looking forward to what else you are going to switch around!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: geega [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Can't wait to see who else you switch around like Kikyo & Koga. I would love to see a serious demon slaying Miroku & a very flirty priestess named Sango. Keep up the great story I'm dying to see Kagome get a big Sit from InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like. I can't wait till you update which I hope is soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I know of no one who has done ANY THING like this... Great work!
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