Reviewed By: archforge On: July 14, 2002 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story... Well sort of I like TK and Kari together so you lose enjoyment factor but overall it's a really good fic. The grammer needs a bit of work though but hey nobody is perfect.
Keep Up the Great Writing! |
