| "Bringing Life to the Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ethril On: March 22, 2009 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't really think a threesome is a very good idea. Perhaps in later chapters a type of understanding that Naruto still has feelings for both and periodically goes to one or the other. But a threesome just doesn't seem right for this pairing.
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Reviewed By: SongInTheDistance On: March 17, 2009 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written (I'm an English major, so I'm picky!). In regards to the threesome thing: don't feel pressured into writing something that you don't want to write--you're the author after all. You seem to be doing a great job without taking anybody else's advice! Can't wait to read the next update.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Very touching, can't wait till you update!
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, is there gong to be more?
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