| "Inuyasha AD 4023" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter....
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Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I said in my review of your other story, I love this one (even more than your other one) because of the chemistry between Kags and Inu. It's unrealistic to have too many reviews when you first start a fic, though it may help if you post this on ff.net (not sure if you have) as there is a larger user-base there (hence, more readers, higher number of reviews). This review isn't going to be too helpful, just telling you that I love your original work and that I hope you continue to write. If you would like to hear my thoughts about this story, feel free to contact me (through my mm. account or e-mail). ~~Jay~~
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Title: To All Those I Appreciate for Reading and Reviewing...
Reviewed By: God Amongst Mere Mortals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a note- the rating is for the reviews I recieved. I'm happy that I have some people who have taken a good interest in my efforts. I am appreciative of the reviews and kind words too. The support really helps it when I hit that one section I am struggling to break through before I can hit my flow again. Anyway, although 'I love it! Can't wait for more!" Is good, it would be nice for some constructive criticism or at least some depth. Despite having read thousands of pages of Inufics (probably over 10,000 by now XD)this is still my first attempt at writing one. So help early on would be preffered, before I establish bad or annoying habits. XP .... Also I'm going to start leaving more reminders to review- If only 5% of the readers review then that should be at least 25-30 by now lol... it seems that all fic writers suffer from this. 1% Is usually more accurate. Anyway- thanks for those who have been kind enough to leave reviews- whenever I struggle, know that it helps to have people who care enough at leastto type out a few characters of support ^^ Don't feel shy to drop more reviews you guys! Alright- thanks.
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Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Can't wait to read more....
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the most original retelling of InuYasha and Kagome's meeting. I can not wait till you update. You have certainly captured my attention. Good work and I hope to see some more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending for the 3rd chapter... (WAITING for Supernatural Season 4 to start airing here... Currently trying to block out the horrible noise called Australian Idol, (I've never heard a Metro Station song sang so bad... )) GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! ITS ON!!!!!!!!!!!!! DEAN IS SOOO...... (I Already know what going to happen... but still...
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say about your story is......I LOVE IT!!! Please update as soon as you can. ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its 20 years of suppressed hormones I think Kagome... lol... GREAT Story cant wait for more... I will look forward to trying to find updates while I am in hell (aka school(I've read the The Chronicles of Lucius one too many times...) which start back up tomorrow... (although I'm not sure which is better... holidays where I end up working, or actually being at school...(advanced diploma of computer science... which means Internet access all the time... (which means goofing off all the time...) OH my GOD FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL you other people (all 52 of you) are all lazy! how dare you let out precious Authors go with out comments and praise!!!!!
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