| "Possessive People" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. that was hot. I loved it, and thank god ichigo was turned down, or else...i don't want to know. looking forward to your epic. ~IchiRuki always and forever~
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Title: thankyou!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER I CAN READ IT LOL!!! BUT THIS WAS VERY NICE AND THE LEMON WAS ON POINT WITH THE HOTNESS LOL SO GREAT STORY UPDATE YOUR NEW STORY WHEN YOU CAN
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Title: sorry
Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 11:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry i really want to read your story but the words and sentance are too close together. if you space them more i might be able to read it. but as of right now if i try to read it the way it is now i'll have a bad headache. this is not a flame so please don't be mad at me ok
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Title: hey this was good i liked it
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this was good and i hope that i get to read ur epic paring and i kno this si gonna sound odd but i did sumthin kinda the same as u ( wrote a straight up porn then move on to a bigger more in depth fic)so when you get the first chapter done of it let me kno i wanna read it best of luck 2 ya, Desgardia
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