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| "motivation -Death Note" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kiador StarFang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give 20 because I read the other part to this, but I figured it pointless to post two reviews on basicly the same story line. I enjoyed it, it was very well written and kept in character so well that I thought it part of the original story line. Very good, I hope there'll be more =]
| Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: October 09, 2008 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this with the 2 parts you now have is becoming intensely addictive. how far will you go with it. i know how the real story line 'ends', but what you have here is something else all together. i want more!!! it's kept so well in character that i just have to see where you take things. will you write more? i hope so.
| Reviewed By: sereeirrac On: October 08, 2008 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Makes me wonder if L is just seriously playing the part in order to get Light to admit that he's Kira, or if what he said about protecting him is true. I mean, yeah, there's the sense of justice and all that, but that can easily be clouded by desire. Glad you updated. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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