| "The Other World" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Belzelga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2002 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic had a strong beginning, and a solid storyline. Unfortunately, everything after chapter 2 is kinda weak. The enthusiasm of the first two chapters is just gone. Still worth a read, though. |
Reviewed By: KawaiiKaren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I lovvvvvved this! It was nice and longgggg! ^__^ Okay you had quite a lot of spelling errors, like not starting sentences with capital letters and all...but I forgot about them while I was reading! This story had many twists and turns and I actually didn't get lost in it all, like I do with other fanfics this long. I guess it's because most of it is dialogue and not just a bunch a paragraphs that are described all this stuff that I could careless about! Anyways, it was really humorous as well as action-packed. I hope you do more stories and stuff as interesting as this! I can't believe you don't have ANY reviews! That must suck, since you must of put alot of time and effort into these fanfics...I still wish Amy Rose was actually in it though... |
Reviewed By: Hawk The First On: October 06, 2002 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY liked this story,In fact i'll be reading it a second time just as soon as I finish the review. I think it was one of the better stories around. I mean,The story is SO COOL that you just get absorbed into it and forget anything wrong With it! An EXELENT story! Loved it! |
