Title: Good Reviewed By: inuyoukaigirl1984 On: October 12, 2008 10:30 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Short, but very nice. You could expand on it, make the story longer if you wanted to, by going back and explaining how and why Kagome was cursed. I guess I'm wondering why she was cursed in the first place, for being so super nice. I don't really understand the 'puzzle pieces' thing with Kurama, it kinda leaves you asking yourself if you missed something in the story. But, it's still very sweet, touching and enjoyable. Great job!
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