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Title: Rin_chan Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 04:37 CST Comment/Review: Ooo! This was such a great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! X3 Oh the suspense!!!!!
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Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 21:14 CST Comment/Review: The ending was a bit unusual but in a good way. It wasn't at all what I was expecting. I'm glad to hear that you are going to be continuing your other stories!! I'm just going to put this out there...I hope it's The Breaking Point *hint hint*...lol can't wait to see what you come up with next!!!
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Reviewed By: shmally [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 22:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think you should update this one.. Because I really like it :D Excellent!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 10:50 CST Comment/Review: This was awesome! I loved it! She is kinda copying Cho Hakkai, right? Awesome! I do hope that Kagome will be mostly like her self when this ends though. I am really like this story! Please update again soon!
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Title: Avid Reader Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 04:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hazzah! ^o^ I am the first 'visitor' for the third chapter. *ish proud* Well, as usual, you've posted another great chapter. I'm wondering what Sesshomaru's part is in this as well. Hmm... Perhaps he'll play as an instrument to finish what the teddy has started by completely restoring Kagome's humanity? Maybe he'll knock Kagome unconscious and bring her back to Inuyasha and Co.? I really hope your not planning on having Sessho train Kagome. Especially since it seems like this is a four-shot with an epilogue (I hate youkai-speed/dream-sequence training session stories). In any case, Kagome reached five hundred pretty quickly. I hope she finds those youkai, helps the bear get to his family (it unfortunate that she can't keep him with her) and hurries back to Edo. Hmm, I wonder if you'll have Kagome's eyes end up becoming blue? That'd be interesting... So I'm looking forward to the next/last chapter. I hope the group will still be together by then. Uh... Sorry about your wedding cake. *gives you a piece of her nephew's b-day cake instead* It's really good. ^^ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: nice story Reviewed By: allyct160 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 21:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fic, i enjoyed the fact that you had the future and also the past combined and it sounds good new fic!! keep up good work and also keep up good work in "Second Chance" as well.
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 01:25 CDT Comment/Review: Glad to see you're still cooking up new ideas. I guess I'll be paitently waiting for each update on this one too, now huh? Also, congrats on the teddybear, eh?
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 10:54 CDT Comment/Review: I wanna know what the legend is! For a second there I thought of Saiyuki. Is this going to have a cross of another story? Kagome better make her trip fast, though. Miroku doesn't, exactly, have all the time in the world. And Naraku could be getting stronger all the time that she is away. Unless they use Kikyo to take her place. This was interesting. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 09:56 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! A new story! It sounds pretty good so far. I can't wait for another chapter. Congrats again on getting married. Tell the new hubby we said thanks for sharing you.
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Reviewed By: beckyducky not logged in On: October 17, 2008 08:31 CDT Comment/Review: hi its beckyducky again. I know i should have completed the chapter before reviewing but i read the first line (the legend) and i immediately thought "SAIYUKI...HAKKAI...OMG!!" so yeah. I'll just go and read now. Are you going to make this a lemon fic? Just curious... Oh and have you thought about doing crossovers? I think you'd do spectacular in them... ^^ Bye bye got to read!!
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Title: yaaayyyy Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 02:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this sounds sooo good im truly excited to see what will happen next..... good job.....update soon.....
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