Reviewed By: biologyofaff [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 08:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: OOh, I've always been a big fan of Ukitake/Anyone, and this fic pushes all the right buttons for me. Tee hee. One thing i wanna point out: 'In her black irises' out to be either her black pupils, or her blue irises...since her eyes are blue... Anyway, great work. I want to see more of this yumminess soon :P
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