| "Dark City, Dark Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ajj7sunhawk On: September 17, 2009 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very original , really enjoyed it thanks
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, fascinating. Continue to update this story, it's very well done. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 08:11 CDT
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I really like this story and am sad to see that it has so few reviews. That last chapter with the vampire was so angsty. You're doing a wonderful job. I'm off to go read it again!
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 17:53 CDT
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I really like the stories, but you have some grammar problems that make them sort of hard to read. You keep using 'were'(plural)when you should be using the word 'was'(singular)- "They were" - "He was". Other than that I really am enjoying the various cases they get involved with along with the bits of their own life we are shown.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, new chapter...I love it! Great job, I can't wait for the next one. I love the tension, it's great! Keep up the gift, hope you post soon! B reading U!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: IamJean-ClaudsHumanServantandloveit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool idea, can't wait for thenext instalment. The whole thing of Sesshoumaru having to eat spiritual energy and InuYasha being easily possessed, acting as a filter or catylast is very different. Muchly enjoyed. Keep up the good work. HS :)
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Title: one cannnot live with out the other
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 20:00 CST
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Well that was intersting kinda want to read what happens next. one can not live without the other. whats there story how did they meet. whats going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the rest of this story is like the 1st chapter, then U should get an award! Damn this is intense! B reading U!
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