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| "Chronicles of a Self-Made Shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Frozentempest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm truly surprised at the lack of comments. In my opinion this is a pretty good fan-fic, defnetly got me hooked :P Anyway's, respect for posting new chapter's at such a frequent rate. (Personally I usually get struck by writers block or my motivation fades away, a few pages into the work, would you mind giving some advice on that matter?) Furthermore have you by chance read parts of the "Gotrex & Felix" series, because the style seems similar leaping from chapter to chapter and keeping a good pace going, with little to no "down time". Well, that's that. Bring on the Chunin exams =)
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Frozentempest [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Liked reading it so far, kinda nice not to have another unknown bloodline genius enter the picture. Also incoperated the Character nicely, (no, hey I'm here lets be friend's OK?) So Chara Background is nice =) If you plan on using the Gun more often, I wouldn't mind reading a discription of it (or did I miss it? xD ). Dunno how you wanna continue, but please do ^^
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