| "The Crystal Forest" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 15:59 CST
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OH! I hope you write more to this. It makes an excellent one-shot, but it would make a great chapter story too! I want to know if they defeat Naraku, and if they do, do everyones memories return when they do? Wow, so many question. I love the song too. It is perfect with the story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Lina03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great story though so sad at the same time. Thank you for sharing your work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a lovely integration of the story and the song (actually just a poem to me since I've never heard it). I think that you did Kagome justice in this--her actions are completely true to form. Even though I don't normally like Kagome with anyone who isn't an Inu, this story with this pairing works. Great Job! Huzzah!
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2009 09:45 CST
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Congratulations Madmiko-your story 'The Crystal Forest' has been nominated for "Best Crossover" at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again!
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Reviewed By: Evil Turtle On: October 23, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say Madmiko that whenever I see your stories something in me rejoices. I know that whenever I click on something of yours I will be drug wholeheartedly into a new, exciting and enjoyable world that I will tear through with wild abandon and cry desperately when I am through because of the pain of leaving such a perfectly constructed world. I hope you realize what a wonderful author you are and how much you do to keep fanfiction from falling from its wonderful pedestal into the ruin of teenage dribble and cliche. I can't wait to see the next installment of BWM and any other brilliant machinations of your mind. I just want to say thank you so very much.
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles and flashes victory fans* As always, Kelly, you dazzle me with fluffy goodness and Hiei-Kagome awesomeness!1!!one!! Kagome's so damn big hearted she needs someone like Hiei by her side...he's just selfish enough to want her to be selfish. XD I fell in love with your crystal forest idea by the way, it's a beautiful way to describe her soul--earth is feminine and nurturing, and yet it has the dazzling beauty of light and jewels. But I do wonder if Naraku's side of the lands is kind of like Murky and Lurky's area in Rainbow Brite land...lol.
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Reviewed By: DYquem nsi On: October 22, 2008 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Where do you come up with your ideas. Very imaginative as usual. I wasn't expecting the ending, but it does make sense that a place where he can fight forever would be a paradise to him. Plus Kagome would be there. I'm a little unclear on how the fighting itself works, though. Does she ever have downtime except during the periods the forest is visible, or does the fight go on 24/7? I'm guessing there must be some downtime. She'd be insane otherwise.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 06:37 CDT
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that is so sweet. poor kagome though, being trapped and remembering everything while everyone else doesn't. i was hoping hiei would stay with her. good luck in the contest.
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