| "The Fox's Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 17:01 CST
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this is a good story and i think i've read it before. the problem is that it is so hard to read here. i had to copy it into word and change the color and even then since there was no spacing between sentances much less paragraphs it was hard to read. please format this correctly, it should take no longer than a half hour if you copy it into word, use spell check and then go add paragraphs.
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 21:31 CST
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I am interested in your story and its probably very good, but I couldn't even read it. The color is distracting and it need to be double spaced with paragraphs. Formatting is important. Fix this and I will come back later.
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Reviewed By: Kat_315 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 20:28 CST
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Hi, it's a great story, but i think it would be better if it had paragraphs... i hope you write a sequel soon, i would love to read more about kagome and youko...
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Reviewed By: Riecumbee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 22:33 CDT
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It's an alright story but it's complicated to read. There is a thing called paragraphs!
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Reviewed By: Velasco [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 22:03 CDT
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Please fix this. There are no paragraphs to speak of unless you count each chapter as a paragraph. And, to be frank, it makes your story difficult to read and turns off interested readers.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 00:24 CDT
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I love this, but for some reason both this & the triple chapter of Found in Sand are all run together & not spaced out like they should be, line spacing.
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