"Dog Demon's Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: AWSOME XD and thanks for da warning teh earlier chapters that would not of been something i would have wanted to read Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 18:11 CST Comment/Review: POOR KAGOME inu makes me so mad sometimes i am glad kikyio is dead but personaly i don think even SHE deserved such a fate T~T i wonder what will happen next
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 03:53 CST Comment/Review: wow that sounds a lot meaner than i meant it to... Don't take that last comment harshly. I didn't mean it to come out like that :(
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 13:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Great story, kind of hard to read through all the run on sentences. And you've misspelled just about every word. Oh, and you don't use quotation marks when some one is speaking. The idea for the story is great and i like it... but sweetie, you need a beta.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 00:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You're story just gets better and better! I really like it!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 16:18 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yes! Finally Inuyasha is starting to thaw out!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 01:05 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor koga...The story is getting pretty good! But Longer chapters would be nice.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 16:57 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Not bad! But you spelled WHORE wrong.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 01:28 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another good chapter! Kind of confused about Inuyasha having poisen in his claws..man did you make him evil in this chapter! Poor kagome...Lol! inuyasha has major anger problems! But hopefully things will get better for kagome.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 23:48 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope this is an INU/KAG...I'm a bit tired of reading Sesh/kag fanficts. I don't hate them but there are to many of them. And they don't make a very good pair...unless you make fluffy OOC.
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