| "In the Garden of Eden" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tiffers On: July 24, 2002 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lonely Angel was right, this was on FF.net before--But it wasn't updated, I think it went to like ch. 2, when Vegeta makes one wish from the dragonballs. But that was the clifhanger--it wasn't updated to were we found out what his wish was. I always wondered when it would be finished!!! So you have to update, and like soon. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: July 18, 2002 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsone fic so far! You HAVE to update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks102 On: July 13, 2002 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome so far, you have really creative ideas. The whole "primitive Vegeta" concept is really cool, so please update soon! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was so cool! What happened to the stuff Vegeta's mother placed in the pod? Will Vegeta remember everything, or will he have amnesia or something? |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think I remember this fic from FF.net. But it really didn't get updated often either that or this is a different fic. Okay but this chapter was really really so update soon! |
