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| "The Not-so-Wrong Wrong Connection" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: I Like It!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 03, 2008 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can happily say that I can't wait for the next chapter! Very much fun indeed, though if someone ran up to me and bit my finger i'd probibly beat the sh*t outta them ^^' An 8 on style of writting b/c every now and again you get your present tense and past tense mixed up, but this chpter wasen't too bad. I remeber only one of those ^^' A great read, I cant wait to see what happends next, and I do hope that Naruto and Kiba get to be friends. Until next time, ja!
| Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: November 02, 2008 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lolz this chapter was hilarious~ Can't wait for your next update!! :D
| Reviewed By: RasalynnLynx On: October 30, 2008 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
It sounds interesting. Maybe Naruto could help out some people, not to become popular, more like an undercover, or in-the-background matchmaker. Setting people up. I like your explanation of his abilities, and your examples of how he found out about the red threads. I hope you write again soon. Great story.
| Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: PaigeHatakeUchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly loved thiss i think it is amazing how you have written it 10/10 welldone! i hope to see more of this story XxX Check my storys out if you have a chance Thanks if you do could you review ? XxxxX keep up the good work
| Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 24, 2008 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
For now I don't want to rate this story until you get further along, I hope thats okay. ^^' So far I really like the idea of Naruto's ability. I think this has the potential to be a really cute story with the prospect of some angst. I do hope you change the point of view to Naruto's in the next chapter. It kinda feels like a narrator is talking, which I think is good but only for the first chapter of any story pretaining to a character's experiance. Anyway, since this is only the begining of the story, you have lots of directions you can take this and many twists and turns you can incorperate. I look forward to the next chapter, please continue! =3
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