| "The Hybrid's Guide to Miko Hunting" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 19:07 CDT
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mmmm? big feet??? you know that say that big feet, well you know. i could just picture hiei wiggling his toes in the sand. then in the next chapter, when she was doing the impressions of kazuma, yusuke, kurama and then hiei, i couldn't stop laughing. and then when hiei kissed her and asked her about the stick, i couldn't stop laughing again. more please. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 17:27 CDT
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*snicker snicker* She's confronted with his bare chest and she has to comment on his ... feet. LOL! Obviously, Hiei has been hanging out with Yusuke too much to be familiar with a saying like that. (Actually, that makes me wonder if Yusuke would know it, too. LOL!) It was a great mental picture you gave us of Hiei wiggling his toes. Too cute! Got more?
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 14:27 CDT
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more please. another great chapter. i thought it was funny that everyone was telling to hold still. i can understand holding still in some area but in certain situations, you can't. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 13:44 CDT
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Okay, your 5th chapter just blew me away. Loved it! You have a real knack for a great drabble. Short and to the point, yet missing none of the steaminess. More? Please?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 01:20 CDT
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Oh, I really loved chapter four! I'll be re-reading that a couple of times tonight. ^_^ Poor Kagome, though, sent away while everyone was fighting and then scolded for getting lost. They should have finished off the bad guys quicker. *nods self-righteously* And you know, I really loved it that Hiei asked her if she was hungry. Really, that was a beautiful moment. I also liked the way Hiei was so sure it would be a boy. LOL! He'll find out. And Kagome's thought that she would give him a son someday just had me grinning like an idiot. I am enjoying these SO much! Thanks for sharing them with us!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 01:11 CDT
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Chapter three was really cute and funny! I loved Hiei's thoughts about how crazy the Reikai was to send youkai into the Ningenkai and a human girl into the Makai. LOL!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 19:12 CDT
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i like kagome's hunch. i think this one is adorable. especially since she blamed her hormones on hiei. i also thought it was cute when hiei asked her if she was hungry. update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 17:02 CDT
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you have to continue this chapter. i want to know what happens when she gets to the den. i also want to know wat would happen if someone accidently touch or grab at kagome, what hiei's reaction would be. update soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 16:10 CDT
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this is great! i would love chapter three to be continued.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramagirl On: October 26, 2008 13:10 CDT
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every males nightmare!!!! buyint the dreaded feminine products! lol! i love his solution to the problem. only thing is after she has the baby, his nightmare return tenfold. update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 08:50 CDT
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Oh, that was priceless! *snicker snicker* He may be a demon, but he's still a male, and eventually, they are all brought low when forced to come face-to-face with the dreaded "feminine products." I liked the way he tried to reason out which ones she needed. Oh, the male ego! And I love his solution to the problem! This is a terrific little collection you're starting here. More!
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Reviewed By: DYquem nsi On: October 26, 2008 08:12 CDT
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what a sneak. What a fun little drabble. It just leaves you smiling. I hope you do have more chapters in the guide. That would be great. I will say one thing. How does Hiei know that Kagome really wants that fruit that badly. ;-) Perhaps she is just as sneaky as he. I wouldn't put it past her to entice him that way.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 00:21 CDT
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so good. i love it. i never thought of making hiei so sneaky. i love souta's question. i couldn't stop laughing. is there going to be more than this? i hope so. update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 23:39 CDT
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Hmmm. I was just looking at the title. Dare I hope you're going to have other examples of "miko hunting" for us to enjoy?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 23:31 CDT
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Oh, I love it! I wish I'd written it. LOL! I always knew Hiei was sneaky. ^_~ The best part was Souta's question. You had me cackling when I read that.
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