| "The Hybrid's Guide to Miko Hunting" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elfgurl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 19:56 CDT
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Who was the girl Kurama wanted to kiss? Yukina? (For chapter 15, Mistletoe)
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 12:15 CST
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Typical Hiei. He just isn't the type to dish out compliments.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 18:30 CST
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For smells Pt. 1. Poor Kagome. They're both just being rude to her. Hiei needs his butt kicked. ^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 08:56 CST
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 15:08 CST
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NOW I get it. Kurama was going to kiss Hiei's daughter. It took a couple of times for me to figure that out. Just slow, I guess :-) Kurama is lucky Hiei only warned him verbally instead of taking the opportunity to knock him about. That was cute.
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Reviewed By: hellfire95X(NSI) On: January 01, 2009 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that one was halarious. Props for you Kurama! You go guys! Don't let Hiei get to you LOL. But that one was sweet, go Kagome!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 00:52 CST
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Oh, that was terrific! I absolutely loved your take on "Mistletoe Mischief!" The part about Kagome feeling guilty for worrying her son about her and Hiei arguing was so real, especially since she really couldn't even remember what they had been arguing about. That was a nice touch. And Hiei's slightly awkward show of affection for his son was touching and just a little heartbreaking in some respects. I was really struck with the family you gave them and honestly, I think you have a fantastic set-up for a longer story. Kurama trying to kiss Hiei's daughter and coming face-to-face with Hiei instead was priceless. ^_^ (Of course, if Hiei's daughter was around 16, that would make Kurama around 37 at the least, so EW! Hiei needs to skewer him. LOL!) I really liked this one!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 23:17 CST
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that is cute. i think its adorable that kagome's and hiei's son tried to get them to kiss and make up. and then kurama trying to steal a kiss i think from either kagome or her daughter, bringing out mister protective husband or father is priceless. update soon. this one is too cute.
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Reviewed By: Hellfire95X(too lazy to sign in!) On: December 12, 2008 09:10 CST
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It was sad and beautiful. Forgive me though I don't really undertand the concept of thisone.Did he harm her before and shes alive now? I;mkind of confused with this one but it was still a beautifulone-shot.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:52 CST
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Noooooo! She can't do that! With a hot, naked fire demon right in front of her? Not the time to be thinking of switching teams. ^_~ And hey! The fact that he didn't kill her speaks volumes. He must have liked her pink frillies. ^_^ I'm just glad she kept looking. Woohoo! 'Atta girl, Kags!
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Reviewed By: hellfire95X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny nearly wet myself! Don't go les Kag we need some one for Hiei to..well you know can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 19:09 CST
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who knew that kagome was a peeping kagome. even if it was an accident. i love hiei's question. it is just so him. update soon. i want to read some more.
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Reviewed By: hellfire95X [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh totaly I enjoyed that one alright (i enjoy all of em). Hope Hiei gets them back though.I found it halarious.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 21:21 CST
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naughty kurama and yusuke following hiei to finding out what he is up to. kurama's idea about finding out more informatio to blackmail hiei is sneaky. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Fantastic, I loved them all! Should have reviewed them all individually, but my eye rather swollen at the mo, so i hope you'll forgive me! All well written, beautiful and original! I think my fave was embers, that was amazing! The cat's out of the bag was very cute ;) Kudos again!
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