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| "A Slave to Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Undertakerfan2010 On: November 04, 2008 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. LOVE IT!! Needs some more length to it though, but all in all great.
| Reviewed By: patdav On: October 28, 2008 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story don't have any depth--- the plot is good, the story is good----- but it like you are reading a summary of the story ----- i dont feel any connection with the character...... by the way I a G/CC fan and am glad you include them in your story.
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