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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 12:56 CST
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Great chapter finally he has someone to confide in. I agree with your other reviewers, I also think Miroku should be a friend he is definitely going to need it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally inuyasha clued in miroku... he should be a friend... inuyasha should at least have someone helping him and giving some kind of advice... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should make Miroku a friend because you already have one person against him. He needs some one that will try to help him so that maybe when she is older it won't look so bad. It's because she is so young and his sister, but not as bad if she were older. Crazy I know, but being sister and brother is a little better than being so young.
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Reviewed By: ilona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 15:09 CST
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OMG.. great story! i think Miroku should be a friend!! inu should at lteast have a friend who should support him through this time...
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Title: Confused
Reviewed By: Behave On: November 12, 2008 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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I am writing you just because I am confused by the reviews. In the field I am in, and how I think, the whole Idea is ....Bothersome. You see I am in Psych, and I am to do a paper on just this subject. Your writing is very mature, and I do like your style of writing. The sad part is my professors always say that you have to wonder about the condition of the muse who is writing. This is not a flame what so ever, just concern
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 17:45 CST
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Once again another great chapter! Things are getting quite serious between the two I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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Title: great story (:
Reviewed By: ilypoo On: November 07, 2008 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how this story is going, please update soon (:
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are getting intense... what will inuyasha & kagome do next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Fanfic Club member
Reviewed By: Ghettagyal On: November 07, 2008 05:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1) thankyou u for allowing me 2 review 2) Dat was flippin fantastic, like nuff people write about incest between inu n fluffy but dey never really capture the shame just the lust, i love how u tied them in so beautiffully, dam it has the perfect twists n turns, the last chapter makes u wonder if someone is going to report inu to social services or sumin, wow i'm in lub wit ur writting SHoCKiNg~ ~D3$U 3) i am sooo going 2 patiently wait 4 an update n tell my friends bout diz, Ghettagyal, TTFN
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Reviewed By: kisakia On: November 06, 2008 22:36 CST
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Just started reading this story, I really like it so far. Please update soon. would like to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: chichers On: November 06, 2008 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! That was an amazing chapter. I can't wait to read more. I really really like this story.
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 21:04 CDT
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Great chapter! This is quite an interesting turn of events. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: chichers On: October 30, 2008 21:53 CDT
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This is actually quite an interesting story and i would like to read more. So when you have the time can you update please?
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 19:34 CDT
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First of all I would like to applaud you for writing a story with such a controversial nature and it is extremely well written. Well anywho I really enjoyed reading your story and hope you continue it. I am quite interested to see where this story goes and how it will end.
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