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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2010 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as crude a topic as it is....a story is a story and yours is a great one about how one might feel in that type of situation. im glad you kept miroku as a friend. im dying to see what lays ahead for the both of them. im also hoping that they are not blood relatives...but in most cases that wouldnt be realistic. plz continue with this story soon. as i said in the beginning, it is a crude topic to write on and im not for incest at all. but a story is a story. many ppl write stories about what they want to, why not you. lovely, dramtic stroy. plz continue with updates soon.
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2010 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as crude a topic as it is....a story is a story and yours is a great one about how one might feel in that type of situation. im glad you kept miroku as a friend. im dying to see what lays ahead for the both of them. im also hoping that they are not blood relatives...but in most cases that wouldnt be realistic. plz continue with this story soon. as i said in the beginning, it is a crude topic to write on and im not for incest at all. but a story is a story. many ppl write stories about what they want to, why not you. lovely, dramtic stroy. plz continue with updates soon.
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Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2010 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You have to update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: ezaangel (nsi) On: September 07, 2009 00:12 CDT
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Sorry but this is not normal. I don't understand how people can write about incest so easily. This is not a light subject, this IS NOT romantic, it is sick and I really hope you understand the severity of it. Even writing about it is questionable on your part
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha finally left... what will happen to kagome... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: double Z On: July 05, 2009 00:32 CDT
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soooo u gonna update anytime soooooooon??
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Reviewed By: cutiepie12332434 On: April 30, 2009 21:00 CDT
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write the next chapter plz
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 17:49 CST
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Well I have never had sex before either, but I have read a lot of sex scene/lemons and this is a pretty well written sex scene/lemon. Well anywho love the story can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: JTHMlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 22:03 CST
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Hey you never had sex before...me either and that was so good. I love this story
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Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story just keeps geating better I cannot wait to find out what happens next. Your writing style is great I feel the charters emotion with every word. I feel so bad for Yash sure he is hurting kags, but he is just hurt and sad.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha was planning on leaving for a while now... but inuyasha & kagome finally did it... and then inuyasha left without telling anybody... what will kagome's reaction be - his parents - miroku & sango?... hope kagome won't get pregnant?... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ghettagyal On: November 23, 2008 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo so is she still 13 or is she 15 now? like is she just about to start high school or is she done it?? other dan dat great story, i'm hoping inu gets reported to da feds soon, disowned or Kagome becomes older n runs away wit him.... call me pesdimestic(sp) but i'm a fan of angst ... ja ne
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Reviewed By: InvictusCanisDeus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 07:18 CST
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Well this is an unexpected surprise. I can't wait to find out his reaction.
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Reviewed By: kathleen On: November 19, 2008 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am curious in this story are kagome and inuyasha blood kin or i got that he is several years older than her and is attracted to her on an intimate level and has taken liberties and she has these same feelings for him and doesn't seem to mind i mean if they are blood kin then it would be inappropriate but if they are not and the parents adopted inuyasha before kagome was born or kagome was a small child and thw mother wanted another child and adopted alittle older child and she (kagome) was a one or two year old it is possible but there are blood siblings that have felt and acted on those feeling but i was curious and it it is a great story
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so miroku now knows inuyasha's feelings... and looks like with kagome graduating she'll be staying with inuyasha?... wonder what'll happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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