| "Someone To Watch Over Me" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 21:17 PST
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Hummmm... This is an Inu/Kag fic, right??? Cause why is Sessy here?
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 20:36 PST
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i love it update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 16:23 PST
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the punctuation seemed to be really off in this chapter. It made it a little difficult to read. If you ever want help cleaning it up, contact me.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 12:19 PST
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omg this chapter was soooo good!!! i dont usually comment aftera chapter until the very end of the fic or if i just read a big chunk of chapters at one and im caught up...which means that your fic is reallly good! omg i loved itXD lol it had me worried there for a sec when kagome called out to sesshoumaru...i thought it was turning into a sess/kags ficXD lol i like sesshoumaru and all as a character but that pairing always made me creeped outXD inu/kags all the way! good job with this chapter and i cant wait for the next one=D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 02:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol a lot of people are scared that its a Sess/Kag.. anyways Oo im all excited!! LET THE FIGHT BEGIN!! :D
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Reviewed By: kjpann On: January 23, 2009 02:15 PST
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this fanfic is so totally AWESOME, man! This is not a sesh/kag pairing right cuz seshoumaru calls kagome inuyahsa'a mate. Update quickly
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Title: This isn't a flame.
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 22:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please for gods sake tell me this isn't a sessh/kag pairing...T_T This is an Inu/Kag pairing right? I love the story but I hope it's not a Sessh/Kag I hate that pairing so much. It's so unrealistic...>_>
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2009 12:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fanfic is really goodXD ive never read one quiet like this before...its really interstingXD at first i thought there was like rape involved and then when there wasnt i was so relievedXD idk...when a fanfic involves rape it just takes away from the story fo rme..idk why...but great storyXD and i love your portrayal of the characters...cant wait for an update=D update soon pleaseXD
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 13:36 PST
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Congratulations WhisperingWolf-your story "Someone to Watch Over Me" has been nominated for Best Romance:Other at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! wbk
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 10:31 PST
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Hi, sorry I haven't been reviewing. I have not been doing that very much lately. This sounds good. You have left a lot of questions, that we are all just begging to get answers too. Thanks for the message, can't wait for more. PS. I have read the one shots, loved the last one with Sesshoumaru.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo very nicely done :D Ginta and Kagome's mum surprised me XD hmmm.... make sure that Kagome's uncle has a painful death >.> bastard.. cant wait for the next chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 03:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope that something very nasty happens to her uncle. I want to grab him around the neck and shake him till his ears bleed. You've done a good job of writing a bad guy that is sooo easy to hate. I love how you've writen Inuyasha. Very good combo of him wanting to protect her and take care of her. The thing with Ginta and her mom is a wonderful twist. I really like their relationship. Very sweet. i just re-discovered this tonight. I'm glad you updated. I'm going to re-read the first few chapters tommarrow. I will watch for further updates. Very good, keep up the good work. :)Eluwei
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Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: December 17, 2008 21:06 PST
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I love your stories. And I do hope that you will update Don't Speak one day. Other than that, great job! And... update as soon as you can! :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 23:05 PST
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one can see how certain members of the 'pack' would feel irrational guilt, it's only human nature. ♣ i liked the way you have yasha as a rational, mature, caring, and intelligent pack leader when push comes to shove. i like how you portray him as 'stepping up' when it's needed. ♠ enthralled ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 23:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... hope kagome & inuyasha stay together... seems that everyone is trying to protect kagome... things are still quite complicated... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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