Reviewed By: Tiffy On: January 17, 2009 18:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Awww. Probably because you were up in the middle of the night writing it, I don't like it QUITE as much as your other fanfics, but it's still good. Plus, original. I've never read a fanfic purely on their wedding, especially from his POV. I think he would've been a little irritated by her focus on him, but that could've come later. He WOULD'VE been that amazed by her. It was very lovely, especially for so late at night.
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