| "Drunken Silver Night" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: good so far
Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I am enjoying your story so far I can not wait to see it plays out.
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Reviewed By: Little Red On: November 04, 2008 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I really wanted to read it. Its got a good hook in the summary and an eye chatching name or I wouldnt have read the summary... But after the fisrt paragraph or two of dialog I just couldnt do it... Its to fast, you just kinda throw us into the middle of an argument and we kind have to figure things out as we go... I prefer a slower start. Tell me whats going on and who Im reading about, let me get to know them before you throw the hilarity of there arguments at me... Its an interesting one, like I said, it caught my attention, to bad you couldnt keep it...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessss! found a good fic! Pretty good begining. I hope you keep kikyo out of this. It would be really interesting to see what happens between inuyasha and kagome without kikyo in the picture. I think naraku is enough of a threat.Lol! But you're the one writing this not me! Update soon. And thank you!
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Title: Sweet!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Went fic hunting again and came across this lil one. Not too bad, I must say. Heh, Id got for Angel Number One my own self, hehe. Decent start - update when ya can! ;)
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