"Crystal Slipper" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: reha On: September 08, 2002 17:13 CDT Comment/Review: I loooooooove it, i really like then end. with darien/endymon actually being artimis, great twist! i really liked it, hey could you do sequel? ya know, like after all of this about serena and darien/endymon/artimis life together, or whatever ^-^ that would be great! |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 23, 2002 01:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey this is pretty good and i want to read more i really like how this is turning out oh and one more thing are u going to be calling artimis darian or edymion u don't have to but the only thing is when u say artimis i start thinking the cat artimis. Well ne way g2g Eo |
Reviewed By: Otaku_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 16:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SO WONDERFUL! SO SWEET! SO... SO FANTASTIC! JUST THE KIND OF STORY THAT I LIKE!
This is such a great story! You made it flow... and make sense... and you added all that nice mush- just the right amount of it too. ^_^ Keep on writing! |