| "Sesshoumaru's Bad Fluff Day" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would greatly appreciate it if you would up-date..... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLAESE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEAAAASE UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 11:51 CST
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Cool, another story? :D Didn't know that. The first chapter was hilarious and totally unexpected. XD I'm amazed he didn't finish off the poor farmer for that insult. The part where Miroku turn pedophile reminds me of a pic I drew of that particular thing happening. :) Umm, but Sango wearing satin? O.o I'd always imagined it being either leather or some kind of demon hide.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 06:27 CST
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Great update though it sort of almost crossed the line with Miroku posing as a petifille...thankfully Sessy came to the rescue just in time though!!! Looking forward to reading more
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 16:34 CST
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LOL This is really funny! I thought I was going to fall over when the farmer proposed to Sesshoumaru. LOL The insults are great. This is just too good. Can't wait to read another chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Resilience (not logged in tho) On: November 16, 2008 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. good description. lay off the ' and such when Inuyasha is talking. it makes it seem like he's british or something. you got the characters down finely otherwise.
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Reviewed By: Feloidea On: November 11, 2008 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, ... that is a very nice idea. *grin* I just can't stop imagening how Sesshomaru must have felt like with that, obviously blind, farmer requesting their marriage. Nice style, you quite got their behaviour ( espacially Rin's and Jaken's ( honourable staff, ... lol )) although I really can't imagine what Sesshomaru would do if that would happen. His progress in the series makes this taff too, ... so your story ( his reaction ) doesn't seem impossible. Keep on going!
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Reviewed By: chells319 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 16:39 CST
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haha that was hilarious! keep writing please! =]
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Reviewed By: RinChan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly hilarious! I didn't see that one coming until it was too late! ^_^
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