| "Triumph of Devotion" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: October 05, 2002 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow.
I don't really know what else to say. Just... wow.
You didn't include any names, or any indication of who might be who. In fact, the only way I could tell it was DBZ was because of Kame Island, but I'm assuming you guys intended for it to be that way. ^^
That was total awesome-ness. Really, it was. And now I'm gonna read your first chappie. |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: October 05, 2002 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O!!!
Oh.
My.
God.
How do you guys write so good!?
I really liked how you took the original DBZ timeline and made it work for you. All the different times make it really interesting! I like the Japanese you guys included too. I think Vejiita makes a good taishoo. ^_^ But making Choutzu the emperor? LOL!!!
Bideru... that's Videl, right? SHE'S a general? Damn. That bit with Hurcule squealing made me laugh SO much! It's SO TRUE!!! I can just picture him doing that. And then Marron breaking her nail. I almost cried I was laughing so hard. I love how you guys incorporated comedy into it.
Your descriptions are so awesome and vivid... I can actually paint a picture of what's going on in my mind. You don't find too many fanfictions that do that for you.
You guys HAVE to update soon. This fic is so good. I can't wait to see what happens! ^_^
Oh, btw, your titles are so catchy, and your summaries are fantastic. This is my absolute FAVOURITE fic YET!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 28, 2002 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i love the first chapter! it's so full of detail! i love the vivid pictures you guys present in the story. and the mix of time periods is really well done and very original. a very exciting story indeeed!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 22, 2002 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
had to read it again!!!
wow, i can't believe i'm the only one to have reviewed this here! people are so lame!!!! (among other things... >__ |
Reviewed By: masamune On: July 13, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this definitely sounds promising! i've read stories by both you guys and loved them, so i expect this collaboration will be just as good! (but don't feel obligated or anything... wait, yes, i think that would be a good idea... no, really, i kid!!) |
