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| "Purity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ClaireAlbright On: July 24, 2009 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent story. I cried a little. I believe that you have the gift of writing and that you should never stop writing Avatar stories. I feel like you don't leave out any details when you write, which is amazing. Often times, fan fiction writers lose the plot of the show. However, I feel like you use alot god-swearing (agni, tui and la, etc.) which seems weird and out of place and rather prevalent.
| Reviewed By: inurinsama15 On: November 17, 2008 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG that was really good! Is it over? I hope not. Wow is all I can say. Your work is always good.
| Title: amazing
Reviewed By: ghost07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
wonderful story!
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