"Giving In" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Shaka On: October 12, 2002 19:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Its pretty good story. I think the idea of a band is funny,lol. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 21:50 CDT Comment/Review: Very cool. I mean it!
I absolutly adore your writing. It can get a bit confusing at points but you generally clear everything up. My one compaint is that your chapters are too short ^_^ *laughs* there snot enough writing to satisfy my constant need to read.
Storm
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 14, 2002 23:58 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, I'm sorry. I like the beast, but I'm having a hard time understanding. Is he talking about Frieza, or (like Goku) his hiding Saiyan side? |