| "Sword Envy" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: The wonders of innuendo...
Reviewed By: Kiroku Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the wonders of innuendo. Poor boys... Ironically, today my colleagues were coerced into watching a video that instructs men how to examine their...ahem, male appendages and check for signs of possible cancerous tumors...I don't know why, but I can just picture something like that happening between Miroku, Koga, and our favorite hanyou... Not a steamy scene, but one where the straight doc tells Inu to whip it out...and the other two just growl...it was funnier in my head. :( ~Kiroku Ookami~
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMFAO! at the begining i didn't catch the drift but after another round i got it! great job!
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL! I really liked this! I think all your innuendos worked quite well - lucky InuYasha for having such a magnificient 'sword' (or should I say lucky Kagome?) ^_^
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 01:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh gods, I was laughing from the get-go. xDDD Pervert that I am... Yay for huge hanyou penises! 8D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
*picks self off floor while shaking head, sighs and starts laughing all over again*
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet janis joplin....I just got done reading this deep, thought provoking story on ff.net, and I was considering perhaps writing an introspective for someone just cause I was in the mood....and then I read this. Needless to say, I'm be snickering in the middle of class tomorrow. Thank you so much for writing this, it lifted my spirits!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
i laughed from the beginning to the end. i love stories that make me laugh. i love the double entendre that sparkled throughout the story. this is one of my absolute favorites. i have no idea how you managed to capture so many characterizations so well, but you did. we all know that size does matter. lucky kagome.
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