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Title: Got to say Great job
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your style. I love this story. Update soon I will be waiting like crazy for the next chapter. I started to read up on some of your other work. Great! Keep up the good work. I read quite a few fanfics but yours keeps me coming back to read it over and over again. Alright Later Deathlord86
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2009 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wait if they were made into girls why would they still have dicks? i think it would make it so much more complicated.....im really enjoying the story so far except for that....
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Reviewed By: inu - baby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is the first time a read a story like this but I like it alot, it's really original! I couldn't help but bust out laughing on more than one occasion while reading, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm sorry though I'm not patient I really want to read about Inuyasha (as a male) and Kagome on a date or something. But I'll try to be *sigh*, anywho love it so far update soon!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another update! I think I might know who the mystery man from the subway is now, thanks to your little hint, but I won't say...don't want to risk spoiling the surprise for everyone else. I'm also seriously loving how some kind of magic during the prayer burning ceremony temporarily allowed Kagome to see through Inuyasha's concealment spell. An answer to one of her own prayers, perhaps? Looks like "Shaya" better steer clear of Kagome at work whenever that smoke is circling around her, if gazing through it purifies illusions. If you go the same route as other writers with any type of "secret disguise" plot devise, then I'm sure Kagome will probably end up discovering for herself just who Shaya really is, probably right before he was finally getting ready to confess it himself, too. Or will you be more original in that regard and keep us guessing until the very end? Either way, I will be completely satisfied. You couldn't pay me to be disappointed with this story. While the idea for this story kind of sounded silly at first, and it definitely has its comedic moments, there is a very serious aspect to everything, as well. Wonderful job! Wonderful story!
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Title: Toooo Funny
Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 03:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my good lord I've almost pissed myself laughing like 18 times and im only just now getting to the fifth chapter. My favorite was when Kouga got caught oggling himself in the mirror. You made me waste a perfectly good cup of tea god damn you! Lmao keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was really happy to see that you used 'She's The Man' in this chapter :] I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 07:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for the movie you should try white chicks and the notebook. for the video game mario smash brothers
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 19:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Still you amaze me with the creativity with this fanfic. Will they find Rin? Kagome liked Inuyasha? He didnt like her date with Hojo. I love this. Believe me, I will await the next Chapter and read it after you put it up. This is Great Idea. Later Deathlord86
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Reviewed By: nicluv1787 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 13:46 EDT
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I just love this fic Its an enjoyable read and the situations you place Inuyasha are hillarious! great work i cant wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Masojai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 23:55 EDT
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I really like this fic! You say you wanted some art? I'd love to oblige. My DeviantArt account is Masojai as well, if you'd like to check it out. Let me know if you're interested. =)
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Title: Feudal Association!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 17:36 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and InuGrrrl, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fan art) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & InuGrrrl Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is fantastic!! sooo funny! please update soon! i cant wait to see what happens!
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Title: Great update
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2009 22:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love this fanfic. Just got to tell you its great. K later Deathlord86
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 13:06 EDT
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I love this story a lot. I really really like the concept of this story. It reminds me of my favorite movie, She's The Man. Which brings me to what a movie you should have them watch. If you've never seen She's The Man, It's about how a girl named Viola (Amanda Bines [I have no idea if I spelled that right]) goes to fill in for her brother at his college after he goes off to fafill his dream. And to do this, Viola has to become a guy, and so on and so forth. I think that would make Inuyasha rather uncompfortable. And Halo (1, 2, and 3) is my favorite game. I hope I helped you out :D And great story, I hope you update soon!
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