| "He's My Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 13:06 EDT
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I love this story a lot. I really really like the concept of this story. It reminds me of my favorite movie, She's The Man. Which brings me to what a movie you should have them watch. If you've never seen She's The Man, It's about how a girl named Viola (Amanda Bines [I have no idea if I spelled that right]) goes to fill in for her brother at his college after he goes off to fafill his dream. And to do this, Viola has to become a guy, and so on and so forth. I think that would make Inuyasha rather uncompfortable. And Halo (1, 2, and 3) is my favorite game. I hope I helped you out :D And great story, I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny. I love how Inuyasha keeps spacing out from Kagome's scent. You were right that Kouga deserves a collar after all the teasing he gives Inuyasha about the one he wears in the magna. I liked the reference to being collared like a dog. Re movie suggestion: the one that came to mind instantly was "Tootsie" with Dustin Hoffman in it. Kagome can be making all sorts of remarks about how stupid everyone is for not realizing that it is a man dressed as a woman. This could cause Inuyasha to worry how she is going to feel when she realizes Shaya is Inuyasha. This is only my suggestion though you can do what you want with it. I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: sango_gurlie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought this was freakin hilarious=] and i love the fact that you write long chapters, i read really fast so its good to be reading something worth reading. i actually have a picture on my wall with inuyasha in kagome's outfit, so i had the best mental image!! so please update because i really like this story=D sincerely, sango_gurlie=]
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 11:30 EDT
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How about She's The Man and How to Lose A Guy In Ten Days? The first will hit close to home for Inuyasha and the second is definitely still a chick flick.As for the Wii game with Souta how about Guitar Hero or Mario Cart.Those are games that generally speaking a guy would usually be better at, although I do know some girls who kick ass at both games. Awesome chap by the way, I can't wait to see where you go with the story. Thanks for writing!!
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 08:37 EDT
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HAHAHAHAHA!!! hilarious to the maxim! it was a funny idea to collar kouga,not inuyasha (time for a little payback)
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 14:32 EST
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HAHAHAHAHHAHAA oh my god what a twist! So much better than M Night Shyamalan (hehe). Definitely love it, and makes for a GREAT storyline with some interesting plot development
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Reviewed By: azul4mwa On: February 16, 2009 12:53 EST
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Great start, really interesting and looking forward to more chapters. I am also enjoying your other stories as well. Although, if I may, I think the lovely eye-candy you gave "Shaya" at the end of chapter 2 was a little too soon. Cuz come on, they JUST met. I think if you would have put something more subtle for their first night it would better build the sexual tension, aside from just shoving it in the reader's face. Don't get me wrong, like I said, it was fun to read. Alas, just my humble opinion, please don't take it harshly ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. This is a whole new twist to a very cliched adea i like that. Something different. can't wait for more.
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Title: HAHAHAH!!!!
Reviewed By: Hakudoshi's gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAH!!! I can tell this shit is gonna be REAL funny!!! You had me ROLLIN'!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: LordLore [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 10:00 EST
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Nice work, looking forward to the next chapter. One little thing, I guess most people understood, that Inuyasha/ Koga are not realy female and the 'she' and 'her' stuff was a little bit distracting.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 22:09 EST
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i love it, its gonna be great i can tell, so hurry!
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 00:47 EST
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God that was hilarious! Keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is cute. Well as cute as two men turned women can be... Just do me a favor and don't make Kagome some cussing, spitting, weird, OOC character. I can't stand when stories depict Kagome as some hardheaded girl that cusses and loves trouble.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INUYASHA AND KOUGA GIRLS!!! Bwahahahaha I can't wait to see how they deal with that. Inuyasha's aggressiveness and Kouga's womanizing will be strictly shot down. Kouga is going to be thought a lesbian, I can't wait! Inuyasha is going to be told how "unladylike" the aggression is. Update as often as you can PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 14:58 EST
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oh my god....I don't think this has been done before. Just make sure Kagome isn't a Mary Sue, and You've got a chart-topper, here! update soon, please!
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