| "Two Sides of The Coin" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: X On: November 15, 2009 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I enjoy it greatly. However, a cliffie? I don't enjoy that. Thus, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: demonic_angel_4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 19:10 CDT
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i loved when she gets out of the car and edward comes after her *sigh* priceless lol
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Reviewed By: demonic_angel_4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i myself am not the biggest bella fan the only character i hate more is renesme so any story where she will never exist is fine by me lol anywho love the story and will comment on each chapter ^_^
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Title: neh neh!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 08:30 CDT
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i got 6 emails from mediaminer that told me you updated but NOTHING'S THERE T.T!!!!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: beckbeck On: March 25, 2009 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i've got to say, i think this is almost my favorite chapter of this series! I love how the chapter was written but hate the cliff hanger!!! Why must there be a cliff hanger?!
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Title: wut the hell....
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i feel really stupid. now that has to be caleb!! long curly raven hair? WHY DID I EVEN THINK THAT WAS EDWARD?! Excuse my stupidity. lolz
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Title: NO WAIT!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 10:05 CST
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Wait, I changed my mind!! I'm gunna say the mysterious voice was that dude Caleb! Only cuz he was opening his club thingy (wutever the hell is was) over there! Yea. XD i thought about this all night....
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Title: WHOA....
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 18:13 CST
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I'm gonna go on a limb and say the mysterious dude was Edward... And if I'm right I won't barrel you with my secret stash of rotten tomatoes lol! And poor Cassie!!! AND I HOPE BELLA HAS FRIGGIN BRAIN DAMAGE!! GAH! Anyways, update soon chica!
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Title: HOLY SHIT!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 16:20 CST
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OMFG!!!!! Jamez iz baaaackkkkk....AGAINN!!!! You have to update friggin fast! I hope nobody DIED!! What's Edward gonna do?! What's the rest of the Cullens gunna say?! WHERE'S BROOKE WHEN YOU NEED HER?!!?!?!? Im on the edge..!!!
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Reviewed By: BeckBeck On: January 03, 2009 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* oh, oh, I almost forgot to vote! HMMMM..... I'm going to vote for.... BROOKE! Ha! No wait, I think a drawing of Brooke punching the crap out of Edward would be hilarious, but i think i can only vote for one person, so i vote for Brooke, hopefully i can vote more than once....
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Reviewed By: BeckBeck On: January 02, 2009 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was really really good! It was really good to see Brooke kick Edward's butt ^_^, ha ha.
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Title: EPPIICCC!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 12:41 CST
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WHOA!! That was a friggin good update! I can't believe James came back! Hey, did the powers of their father work on Bella's mind, ya know since her mind iz kinda whacky? NOW I CAN LIVE THE REST OF MY WINTER BREAK IN PEACE!! WOOH!! I'm gunna vote again anyway. BROOKE!! Yea. I just wanna know wut the twinz look like..and their dad. but wutev, i got a good description. UPDATE SOON!! SMILEZPEEPZ, I OUTTIE
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Title: HAHAHAHAAAA-cough-HAAA!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! Brooke punched Edward in the FACE!! Yea!! How ya like them applez?! -Sighs- It would be sooo funny if she kicked him where the sun don't shine. IRON NUTZ LMFAO!!! You should experiment on that theory...Betchya it'll hurt like hell. Yea, I'm perv. XD Anyways, UPDATE SOON LADDYYY!!
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter five was like my favorite so far!!
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Title: GOLIATH!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 13:55 CST
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I dunno why i said that. ANYHOO, YAY!!!! NOW I HAVE SOMETHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO WHEN I COME BACK FROM SCHOOL!! IF I KNEW U IN PERSON, I'D HUG YOU RIGHT NOW.
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