| "Three Days in May" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: I wonder...
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Kinomi, I was wondering, if you plan on writing more chapters for this story, I've read this one a long time ago, and I liked it then, and now I'm re-reading it, thinking to myself, why you don't finish this amazing story. I'm more of a Bulma/Vegeta writer/fan myself, but you're one of the few writers who totally got me hooked on Yamcha and Marron. This story is awesome and I hope you'll pick this on up, and post more chapters because this story deserves it! Wonderfully done, I can't say anything bad, because it's just too good! ^___^ Impatiently waiting for more, Blue Dragon :D
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Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love where you're taking this! And I absolutely love how it's written. There's so much angst and inner conflict. ^^ I like how you're mostly telling it from Marron's side to keep the reader out of Yamcha's mind. Does he really love her and just afraid to tell her? Or is it just a sexual fantasy come true? Ha! I love it. I can't wait for you to update. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 23:22 CST
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How dare you end it there?!? It was getting really good!!!
You know, I've been wondering exactly what Yamcha thought of Marron. That would be totally awesome!
Is she just a sex toy to him? If she's more, then isn't it worth her parents' rage? I can't wait to find out what's going on in Yamcha's mind. Marron is like an open book, mostly because she's the main character and we have a very clear window into her thoughts, but Yamcha has remained somewhat elusive. I have got to know what is going on between his ears!
Oh, a suggestion. Maybe you should write the next chapter from Yamcha's POV so we could see what he thinks. You know it's just an idea and I know you're already working on it. Right? ^_~
Well, I can't wait until you have it done. As always, totally awesome chapter. Very deep and full of emotion, and the lemons were delightfully sour. Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Faye Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you... *points finger and stutters*... YOU! You!!! This is a reallly really really good story. You capture the emotions of Marron so well. I can't wait to see what you have to say regarding Yamucha's inner thoughts. Great job!! Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Faye Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. You are so good at reaching into people's emotions and feelings. The lemon just adds to the romance and isn't just there for a random piece of smut. This is wondeeful! Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know how evil it was of you to cut there?!? I can't believe you did that!!! The story was getting sooo steamy and then the end!!! That is sooo wrong!!! I sure hope it doesn't take you as long to update this time as it did the last. I don't know if I can wait for what seems like forever!!! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 15:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't believe I read this an didn't leave a review! I'm kicking myself as we speak! Ugh! I feel so stupid!
Well, I did read the story and I loved it so much! I hope you start writing again because you're very good at it...very. Well, until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tinie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was by far the best story on media... i've read all your stories, but this one is my fav! ^_^ hope you keep writing! tinie |
Reviewed By: Faye Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST STORY. ^^ the lemon chapter was very sweet despite the, uh, mad passion that was going on.. hehehe. you made Yamucha very sexy, i might add.. *clucks tongue* You and your descriptions, Kinomi. ^^ Anyway, great story, great chapter. Wonderful approach to their relationship. *Claps* |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 23:37 CST
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Once again, great job!!! I am soooo into this story. You have no idea how upset I was when I found you had updated and I was stuck at school in the chem lab, without sufficient time to read your latest chapter. I thought I'd die! Well, now I'm home and have read it and I like the story even more now. Yamcha and Marron are so sexy together. Their relationship unique. Besides, you're a great author and one of the best I've read when it comes to emotions and imagery. I can't wait until you update again, which I hope will be VERY soon. Until then, Peace and Out. |
