| "Yaoi Naughtyness." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Tokeki On: August 23, 2002 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mrrr, VERY good! Although it ended so abruptly, and the Master/Slave bit didn't seem expanded on well enough. Ah, but don't worry, I'll fix that. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kit On: July 16, 2002 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good writing. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Bingo On: July 15, 2002 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
The computer actually cooperated with me. ANYWAY, I really like this writing. It kept me occupied the whole time I was reading it. You have skills, keep using them. Great work, I love it. ^.^ |
