| "Galaxia The stories Of Ilusion" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: It's good!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story! But you need a beta to clean up the grammer and spelling. It's really original.
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Title: It's not a songfic
Reviewed By: Blaze Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be ohnest It's not a songfic Im not sure how to change the setings this a new fresh Novel I wish to publish one day I categorized it as a Tenchi Fanfic Cause the stories world is the same (or based on the world from the Tenchi Muyou series) Thus it might be an alternative universe to the original series I wish you guys compare my Story to the Tenchi Muyou story tell me which is better Tenchi or Galaxia and what did intrigate you about my characters !
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