| "Designed Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: twisted
Reviewed By: fairywm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2010 01:46 CST
Comment/Review:
it's dark and twisted....but i coudn't stop reading it
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Reviewed By: camillian On: August 13, 2009 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's been awhile but when i came back to your fanfictions i was so excited to see more of your work. i read all of this in one go and it left me aching for more. i really like wasteland and was sad that there was no update for its sequel. now i'm hoping you'll write more for this fic. it really has to be one of the most creative and gutwrenching gw fics i've ever read. i hope to be reading more of it in the future.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. It's unique and daring. I am looking forward to the rest of it and reading it agian and again.
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Reviewed By: sseattle On: December 11, 2008 01:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! I love the way it is all coming together, but you still leave unsure what is real and what is a lie - if Duo's memories had been tampered with once, why not screw them up more? Who says Solo doesn't have help with that as well as the killings? You have also created a cast of very real original characters that I have become fond of, the interactions of a group of all-male blue-collar workers is right on!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
damn, awesome. How convoluted! And yes, I'll beta whatever. Just let me know. I can't wait to see how this finishes up :)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
"population yogurt" - I love it. I can understand what you mean about beta-ing. So no prob with that. In fact, your spelling is improving as you get further into it. OOOOOO so who snookered Duo??? He just sets himself up for issues doesn't he? And he didn't seem like he read the files either? Death wish much?
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
okay - need a beta? cause your spelling, word use at times sort of suck. However, your plot idea is great! Interesting turn around of timing in that most place Solo prior to the church - more logical in some ways your way....kudos...Also, is Duo hiding his really wanting to luv a guy cause he doesn't seem to have a lot of respect for women - just certain body parts....If you need a beta email me - anf600@hotmail.com - do luv your work. I have you listed as a favorite.
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