"Mistakes" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 00:05 CST Comment/Review: this seems like a good story so far
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Title: hmmmm??? Reviewed By: Tohma On: December 17, 2008 15:49 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As long as Kagome isn't raped by a youkai or being a little toooo open with her sexuality, I believe I will enjoy this story, I am not gonna suggest a pairing because I believe you probably already have 1 set up from that review you put down and your just not telling us.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 01:22 CST Comment/Review: Thanks for all the support ^^ There is still alot that has yet to be out in the open. The scene between Yusuke & Kagome was mainly a bit of forshadowing of whats to come when she returns to the feudal era. Basically, her instincts are trying to take over and she doesnt have a lifetime of experience as a youkai to help her reign them in. It also shows that the males are chemically attracted (whether they like it or not) to the pheremones when her instincts are going out of control.
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Title: pairings??? Reviewed By: Misaka On: December 13, 2008 15:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I rad most of the reviews you got and I want to say I agree with Lady, but Yusuke and Kagome pairings aren't as done as Kurama and Hiei, and to tell yo the truth, I am rather tired of them. I'd rather see Kagome with Yusuke than anybody else.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: December 13, 2008 03:42 CST Comment/Review: Yusuke seemed unnerved though. Because of how you wrote it there is still the possibility that you will pair Kagome up with someone else. I mean, if things didn't work out with Inuyasha, then there is no reason for her to be with someone like him. Update soon. Thanks.
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Title: YAY!!!! Reviewed By: Hiiro On: December 12, 2008 20:03 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YUSUKE AND KAGOME!!!!! YAY YAY YAY!!!!! YUSUSKE AND KAGOME!!!! YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!!! PAIR YUSUKE WITH KAGOME PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!! MAYBE SOUTA WITH BOTAN....I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 03:37 CST Comment/Review: okay come on you stopped right when it was getting good. are you going to pair kagome and yusuke together? the attraction is certainly their. update soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: December 11, 2008 02:40 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please update soon. I love this fanfic!!! Who is Kagome going to be paired with? Thanks.
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