| "What He Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Daffys On: June 12, 2010 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could not stop reading this and the twists and turns always kept me guessing, on the tips of my toes. The way you portrayed their anger, their pain, and their love was amazing and I just wanted to thank you for writing this and sharing it.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I finally got to read all of this. Excellent as always and I enjoyed every word of it. Happy to see you posting again and in fine form as always.
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Reviewed By: KathleenKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved the plot, it was something totally diffrent from what i usually read and kept me awake the whole night, because i just couldn't stop reading. Thank you soo much for writing this!
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Reviewed By: Anda On: December 18, 2008 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Note: I'm assuming "1" is the top grade ^_~ The idea of having Kakashi doing something seriously questionable and then having to work through it, together with Iruka, was great. Especially the second half of the story had me in tears and I loved the way you solved the tangled mess Kakashi got him and Iruka and Shiko into. Thanks very much!
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Reviewed By: immecya On: December 17, 2008 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope iruka stays with kakashi, so dont like the girl lol
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