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| "The Cure" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I'm back! Hey! Get back here! Are you running away from me? lol :P
Vegeta: *looks at Kat* Trust me, run. Run as far and as fast as you can. *smirks*
ssjprincess: *shakes her head at Vegeta and chuckles* Your lucky I'm in a good mood.
Vegeta: *raises an eyebrow* I'm lucky? As if there is an even remote chance that you can harm me.
ssjprincess: Don't forget, I carry a frying pan and I'm not afraid to use it. :)
Vegeta: O.o Yeeaahh.
ssjprincess: Ekk! I forgot. The review!
Ok, forget about what I said in my last review about Vegeta not being recognized. I guess he will be recognized.
Vegeta: Look at me , Onna. Who could forget this face. *smirks*
ssjprincess: Or that widow's peak? *smirks*
Vegeta: It's a distinguished family trait, Onna.
ssjprincess: Back to the review...
Now that's what we all need to hear. A Vegeta and Kakarott duet. That would be so... so... so...
Vegeta: disturbing? O.o
ssjprincess: *points at Vegeta* Exactly the word I was looking for. lol
Now for Kathi. *sigh* I hope she can find the strength within herself to stand up for herself and just leave. Abuse is a downward spiral, that has only two ends. One, the woman leaving and cutting off her ties with the abusive male. Or death. I will never understand the mentality of a person that believes they can conform someone to how they want them to be with their fists or by force. But, I'm carrying on here. Basically, I hope Kathi leaves her fiance and He gets his rear kicked for once.
Great chapter. So, where's the next one? :) I've got one more thing to say to you.... You sure have a lot of fics that I want an update on. :P lol | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
Sorry it has taken so long for me to review this, but I have been meaning to get to it, though everytime I started to something came up. So, to make a long story short-
Vegeta: Since when have you cared about making a long story short? Usually you make a long story... longer.
ssjprincess: *rolls her eyes* As I was saying, to make a long story short, I'm here now. :P Now on to my review...
Poor Kathi. I hope your true life experiences were not like this. *hugs*
Vegeta: No woman deserves to be traeted so poorly by a man. I use the word, man, loosely. If a male hits on a woman he is no longer a man!
ssjprincess: I couldn't have said that better myself. I hope Kathi recognizes the repeatitive cycle of abuse and leaves her fiance. In walks Veggie? :)
Vegeta: I'm already here. *smirks*
ssjprincess: *shakes her head and chuckles* I was talking about the Vegeta in the story.
Now for the Vegeta section of the story....
Vegeta is a country singer? There's an interesting concept. :) Anyway, he's tired of the hectic traveling of a successful artist. Now he wants to go somewhere small so he might not be recognized. I bet I can guess where that will be, and whom he will meet in the process. :) I like the first chapter of this. I'm off to read the next. :)
Thank you, for those kind words at the end of the chapter. *hugs* Your pretty great yourself, you know. :)
And you, *gives Chibi Dacra a popsicle* don't stop being adorable. On to the next chapter. :) | Reviewed By: Sam On: July 15, 2002 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic. Not only is it very different but, you make it sound just right. Please update soon. |
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