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| "Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kaesydian On: March 16, 2009 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like it will be a pretty good story. It's *really* uncommon to see a story that focuses on what happens *after* the heroes save the day- except in sequels and fanfic- and even those usually build off the assumption of some sort of happy-ever-after. I also like that your MC is the official hero's best friend- a character arch-type I've always been fond of as well as an interesting character in his own right. I hope to see more of this someday. (By the way- chapter four is actually chapter five, which you've posted twice. Just so you know.)
| Reviewed By: Ida Cippo On: January 04, 2009 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, I promised to read your story didnt I? So I finally found the time to... I dont really know what I expected when I read your short summary, but it matched and even surpassed my expectations. S'raiya is what I had been waiting for, a person who never really cared and at the end still doesnt care ubt how fights on. I liked your idea of the Ruhin and how they came into S'raiya's world, the irony of one wanting to create a better place and failing creating a nightmare. I loved how they met for the first time, it fits to them, that it wasnt planed, that they just had a common goal of fighting instead of surrendering. And finally I like the characters you have introduced us to. Well I dont really like Ryn but I guess my opinion is influenced by the fact I see her only through S'raiya's eyes. But it has a special ring to it, your story, making me read on without stopping ;)
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